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1 My Story on Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:25 pm

CatKween

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I have been working really hard on this story and thought you might like it.Tell me if you find any errors or just have any ideas.
Why the Sun has Rays


A long time ago in South Africa, near the equator, lived two, forceful tribes named Kabuki and Sarakan. Both tribes never got along, and it was always competition. Something tough was going on the next day. It was a fight, or as they called it, war. Because war was going on, many would survive, but others wouldn’t. This brawl was a chance to prove their tribe, and something new was invented just the day before. The bow and arrow, was a fierce tool, and was one of the best things to use. Both tribes knew how to make it, but the only ones who made one, were the ones who could use it in the battle. Others could use rocks or sticks, but the wise choice was the bow and arrow. People became nervous, but they stayed up all night making tools.

By now it was morning, and both tribes, Kabuki and Sarakan were ready to fight. Because they were ready to fight, both tribes had their yellow, red, orange, and blue face paints. Kabuki always had red and orange, while Sarakan had red and blue. One of the tribe members of Kabuki gave the hand signal that he was ready to fight.

Just then, both tribes were lined up on opposite sides of the battle field.

“War!” declared one of the tribe members of Sarakan. It was right away that people had spears in their bodies. People survived, and others didn’t. By this time there were fifty people from each tribe standing there.

“The Sun!” a man hollered in despise. The people who were alive were looking straight at the sun. It was not a very happy look; it was as if though everyone didn’t like him for some reason. They did consider it a man. Just as one person looked in fear, he shot a bow and arrow at it. Then it beamed in light, like if it were being fed with power. Then another and another were shot at it. By this time there were a thousand of them in the Sun. It seemed if it were a part of their everyday lives that they had no idea of.

As a result, those bow and arrows still stand today, and we all live a happy life.

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2 Re: My Story on Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:30 pm

Sashi

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This is a good story. Thanks for sharing it with us!!

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3 Re: My Story on Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:32 pm

CatKween

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Thanks.It was an porquoi talke assignment

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4 Re: My Story on Thu Sep 11, 2008 6:56 pm

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I like it and now at school if we present,which we probably will) I already know yours. JK LOL. That is a good story.

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5 Re: My Story on Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:59 pm

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she already said we are not going to present it

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6 Re: My Story on Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:35 pm

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Oh then I wasn't paying very good attention. Sorry.

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7 Re: My Story on Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:38 pm

CatKween

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must explain .................nevermind

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8 Re: My Story on Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:03 pm

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Ok that was a bit weird.

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9 Re: My Story on Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:12 pm

CatKween

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YOU SHOULD FEEL THAT WAY

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10 Re: My Story on Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:03 pm

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I do trust me.

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11 Re: My Story on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:04 am

CatKween

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ohh dont worry i trust you

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